CORE TWO in class on Friday - Deeds Edit instructions.

On Friday in class, we shared in Google Docs our essay for comment with two other classmates.

In class, you must comment on two other student essays as follows:

1. You must comment on each paragraph:

• highlight an area of the essay, then select comment to get the comment text box...
• explain the information that you feel this paragraph needs to make it a more meaningful paragraph.
• you may ask a question for your comment that requires the writer to give more information or details for the paragraph.

2. When you are done, you must have a comment for each paragraph with a suggestion for more detail.

3. Since another student is also commenting, your comments must be different from the other student comments.